This girl seems uninterested, I was wondering if asking her for her feedback was a good idea 'what do you think of me so far', something along those lines. Whether it's better thru text or IRL. If there's difference at all.
What is it you want out of this? Fucking grow some balls and go after it. Be a man of action.
Pick something to do, then give her ONE CHANCE to do it with you. Then go do it whether she accepts or not. If along the way you see another woman who interests you then introduce yourself and invite her to join you.
It's simply less talk more action.
Go live a good life and women will want to be a part of it.