Is this a good DM opener text?

[Deeppua]

Both saying I'm from Mars and 20 points are inside jokes. She gave that as her WhatsApp number but she isn't there on WhatsApp and she's traveling in my country. So I sent her an SMS.
[DM opener]:

https://imgur.com/a/M6dVQLv

Edit: Please tell me what was a good alternative if you thought this was not right

 

[Fuck This]

Doesn't matter what we think. Her response will tell you.

I'd refrain from assigning points because pretty soon you are keeping score and then it becomes an exchange and quid pro quo.

She should respond to that if she is interested... if she doesn't then