What's new

Online & Apps  Critique My Profile

mjk1234

Space Monkey
space monkey
Joined
Apr 5, 2013
Messages
16
I read Chase's awesome article about online dating (https://www.girlschase.com/content/how-m ... lenty-fish) and revamped my profile. Could someone give it a quick once-over and tell me if tere is anything glaringly wrong with it?

Hi, my name is Michael. A bit about me: I work in IT by day so I can follow my passions in my free time. I'm learning to play tennis (what a frustratingly difficult game!) and I play music nearly every day. Being somewhat musical, I listen to a lot of music. Mostly anything but I stay away from rap, metal, and most country. I love a good coffee and I have a bit of a sweet tooth I have to keep in check with racquetball :)

I just got out of a long term relationship and I'm ready to get back to the adventures of the dating world. It's been a while and I've never dated in Oklahoma so I'm curious to see who is out there for me. I'm hoping to find someone who enjoys good conversation about people, relationships, what makes us tick, and wherever else the conversation flows. I want to find someone who is smart, confident, funny, optimistic, attractive, and active/athletic. If you're only five of the six, that would probably be okay too :)

Thoughts?
 
the right date makes getting her back home a piece of cake
Top