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Hello gents,
I've been away from active participation on GC for quite a while (and sadly I'm still gonna be for a few weeks at least), but on this particular topic I have some thoughts that I hope might be helpful
To get the things I enjoy out of the way, I'd like to say that I really dig the art style and color theme is 10/10.
For the comfort of analysis I've created a compilation of all 7 themes.
https://ibb.co/982tGNp
Now about choosing. I've gathered 5 criteria for comparison of those 7 images:
1. position of the guy
2. how many girls there are
3. where do those gals look
4. text placement
5. placement of his hands.
Ad.1 Position of the guy: In the first two pictures, I do agree that they look like the guy hasn't approached yet (first impression). Because of that, I wouldn't choose them.
Ad.2 Number of chicks: I also strongly agree that two girls are better than three - that intimacy aspect is huge. With three girls, it starts to look as a scene from a movie with our hero moving through the crowded street. Also, less characters makes the drawing feel less cluttered. Last but not least - hooking two girls looks more believable to a newcomer than hooking three (or more).
Ad.3 What the girls are doing: Images 1 and 2 - two girls are absorbed in their chatting while the solo one is watching the scenery. Images 3, 4 and 5 look like a stock photo of some models presenting the new collection or something. There's no interaction there - I agree about the nuances, but as far as I understand the forum should get attention from all new users, not the more knowledgeable and skilled ones. For a beginner, it might look like there's no chemistry at all, because two of them are just looking at the guy and the other one is looking away. Also, the logo won't be huge, so little touch between the girl and the guy may not necessarily be visible. That leaves us with 6 and 7 to choose between.
Ad.4 Text placement: I like both text placements. Both are great - but I believe that placing the text above the picture could also be cool, so I've attached an example.
https://ibb.co/5LsyGNs
Ad.5 Hands placement of the guy: In this regard I'd go with... none. In the first one he's just staring at the ass of the solo girl. In the rest of them he is... handcuffed. Dead-serious first impression. I do understand his hands are placed on his jacket and all, but still - it looks like he's handcuffed. Once you get that impression, it's hard not to imagine that he's an inmate VIP being escorted to his cell by lady officers.
All in all, I would choose either 6 or 7.
Also, could we please do something with his hands? It's really huge IMVHO.
After a quick meditation, I've decided to add my idea - I know, it's not the highest graphic quality, because I'm terrible at drawing and also using Paint. Nevertheless, now it looks like he's holding them and it's more intimate. I really enjoy the outcome. What do you think about this proof of concept??
https://ibb.co/ZLHXBtJ
Last thing (due to the discussion, because when I first saw this topic and the name I liked it and thought it was A-OK): synonyms for the brand name. I've given it a thought and here it goes.
* heartbreaker - sounds negative;
* philanderer - too long;
* rake - sounds like drake and it's too easily associated with some medieval fantasy;
* paramour - it's actually OK;
* wooer - sounds weird;
* boytoy - it may be just me, but it sounds too similar to toy-toy and also sounds like something associated with being dominated.
Other than that, "Moths and Flames" would sound cool, but could also be too misleading, sadly.
However, there's one more thing other than paramour that's been under our radar and it's surprisingly obvious if we think where we are...
What about...
Skilled Amants?
(And yes, I'm 100% serious. I think it sounds cool and unique and emphasizes the nature of our place really well.)
All the best in 2019, folks!
J.
P.S. If you don't see the images, just click right mouse button on their icons and either open them in a new tab or copy the URL and paste it in a new tab. If that doesn't work, please help me upload it properly - or I just could send you a PM with all 3 images.
P.S.2. I've decided to change imgs into URLs for easier access, but if someone could tell me how to include them properly so they are visible on the boards, I'd be grateful.
I've been away from active participation on GC for quite a while (and sadly I'm still gonna be for a few weeks at least), but on this particular topic I have some thoughts that I hope might be helpful
To get the things I enjoy out of the way, I'd like to say that I really dig the art style and color theme is 10/10.
For the comfort of analysis I've created a compilation of all 7 themes.
https://ibb.co/982tGNp
Now about choosing. I've gathered 5 criteria for comparison of those 7 images:
1. position of the guy
2. how many girls there are
3. where do those gals look
4. text placement
5. placement of his hands.
Ad.1 Position of the guy: In the first two pictures, I do agree that they look like the guy hasn't approached yet (first impression). Because of that, I wouldn't choose them.
Ad.2 Number of chicks: I also strongly agree that two girls are better than three - that intimacy aspect is huge. With three girls, it starts to look as a scene from a movie with our hero moving through the crowded street. Also, less characters makes the drawing feel less cluttered. Last but not least - hooking two girls looks more believable to a newcomer than hooking three (or more).
Ad.3 What the girls are doing: Images 1 and 2 - two girls are absorbed in their chatting while the solo one is watching the scenery. Images 3, 4 and 5 look like a stock photo of some models presenting the new collection or something. There's no interaction there - I agree about the nuances, but as far as I understand the forum should get attention from all new users, not the more knowledgeable and skilled ones. For a beginner, it might look like there's no chemistry at all, because two of them are just looking at the guy and the other one is looking away. Also, the logo won't be huge, so little touch between the girl and the guy may not necessarily be visible. That leaves us with 6 and 7 to choose between.
Ad.4 Text placement: I like both text placements. Both are great - but I believe that placing the text above the picture could also be cool, so I've attached an example.
https://ibb.co/5LsyGNs
Ad.5 Hands placement of the guy: In this regard I'd go with... none. In the first one he's just staring at the ass of the solo girl. In the rest of them he is... handcuffed. Dead-serious first impression. I do understand his hands are placed on his jacket and all, but still - it looks like he's handcuffed. Once you get that impression, it's hard not to imagine that he's an inmate VIP being escorted to his cell by lady officers.
All in all, I would choose either 6 or 7.
Also, could we please do something with his hands? It's really huge IMVHO.
After a quick meditation, I've decided to add my idea - I know, it's not the highest graphic quality, because I'm terrible at drawing and also using Paint. Nevertheless, now it looks like he's holding them and it's more intimate. I really enjoy the outcome. What do you think about this proof of concept??
https://ibb.co/ZLHXBtJ
Last thing (due to the discussion, because when I first saw this topic and the name I liked it and thought it was A-OK): synonyms for the brand name. I've given it a thought and here it goes.
* heartbreaker - sounds negative;
* philanderer - too long;
* rake - sounds like drake and it's too easily associated with some medieval fantasy;
* paramour - it's actually OK;
* wooer - sounds weird;
* boytoy - it may be just me, but it sounds too similar to toy-toy and also sounds like something associated with being dominated.
Other than that, "Moths and Flames" would sound cool, but could also be too misleading, sadly.
However, there's one more thing other than paramour that's been under our radar and it's surprisingly obvious if we think where we are...
What about...
Skilled Amants?
(And yes, I'm 100% serious. I think it sounds cool and unique and emphasizes the nature of our place really well.)
All the best in 2019, folks!
J.
P.S. If you don't see the images, just click right mouse button on their icons and either open them in a new tab or copy the URL and paste it in a new tab. If that doesn't work, please help me upload it properly - or I just could send you a PM with all 3 images.
P.S.2. I've decided to change imgs into URLs for easier access, but if someone could tell me how to include them properly so they are visible on the boards, I'd be grateful.