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Hey guys this is definitely off topic but I know a lot of you seducers out there are know about marketing and wording things as best as possible.
Long story short, I'm starting a student organization at my university and I'm doing somewhat of a Facebook marketing campaign to attract members as well as leaders.
The student organization is a self-development club that has stolen Elliott Hulse's theme of "Becoming the strongest version of yourself and inspiring others along the way"
My strategy is as follows.
I have created a Facebook group page with info video pinned and on auto play so if you get to the page you automatically start watching the info video designed to inspire you to join the cause.
The tricky part is getting people to check out the FB group page.
To do this I'm going through various University Group pages that would have qualified club members. I view individual students facebook pages and if it seems like they'd be a potential club member I send them a personal FB message.
I've gotten a few hits here and there as well as one guy that has said he wants to join.
I would like some feedback on the personal message as this is the real clincher as to if someone is going to click the link to find out more:
What would you do differently?
I feel like I need to make it more personal sounding and less "Mass marketerish".
Critique and comments appreciated!
-Rob
Long story short, I'm starting a student organization at my university and I'm doing somewhat of a Facebook marketing campaign to attract members as well as leaders.
The student organization is a self-development club that has stolen Elliott Hulse's theme of "Becoming the strongest version of yourself and inspiring others along the way"
My strategy is as follows.
I have created a Facebook group page with info video pinned and on auto play so if you get to the page you automatically start watching the info video designed to inspire you to join the cause.
The tricky part is getting people to check out the FB group page.
To do this I'm going through various University Group pages that would have qualified club members. I view individual students facebook pages and if it seems like they'd be a potential club member I send them a personal FB message.
I've gotten a few hits here and there as well as one guy that has said he wants to join.
I would like some feedback on the personal message as this is the real clincher as to if someone is going to click the link to find out more:
What would you do differently?
I feel like I need to make it more personal sounding and less "Mass marketerish".
Critique and comments appreciated!
-Rob
