Tinder conversation report. Advice and feedback welcome

[killerman]

So I matched with a girl on tinder the other day and decided to try out something different. Below is the conversation we had. Please let me know what I could have done better. I think i've got the right idea, though I may be wrong:

Me: Hi! How's your tinder treating you?
Girl: Hey It's a bit random to be honest haha; have only been on here a couple of days. How about you?
Me: Yeah not bad! Good to meet another fun loving girl ;-) By the way I'm planning an adventure, fancy joining me?
Girl: Oo what are you planning?
Me: We're heading to the Far East. Fighting demons and sea creatures
Girl: What do I need to bring?
Me: Bring an AK46, axe, bible and crucifix. And don't forget to dress in your sexiest Lara Croft outfit ;-)
Girl: I can do that.
Me: Cool Let's meet next week then. When are you free?

Also is there any way I can rescue the situation and get her out? It may be a little late now, a couple days, but maybe I can say something that will flip and change her mind? Thanks!

 

[pks391]

Hey killerman,
From what i observed, you could've replaced 'fun-loving' to 'cute' in your sentence. Fun-loving sounds more friendly. You should be flirty as much as you can.

You did good at stimulating her imagination....from the looks of it, she seems to be on the same page as you.

When you say "rescue', I am assuming that she either did not reply back or she did and you just want guidance on what to do next. I would recommend reading Chase's articles on setting up dates. But if you ask me, two things must be extremely important before you go forward with your plan, viz. the venue and your process. All of this is assuming you're looking to get laid.

If you ask me, texting her to ask her out when she did not respond to your last question seems a bit desperate or ever so slightly needy. However, that is just my opinion. But if it would be me texting her, it would sound something like, "So......(venue) at 5?" Short simple and non-needy.